SAZA

[SAZA]

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[atrb=style, background:#110000; color:#572d21; font-family: Arial; border-right: 3px solid #572d21; border-left: 3px solid #572d21; border-bottom: 3px solid #572d21;] Saza Basic Information ALIAS :The Flame throwing Pirate AGE : 20 GENDER : Male SEXUALITY : Strait NATIONALITY : fire nation OCCUPATION : Thief\Pirate AFFILIATION : Himself Biophysical Profile FACE CLAIM : Fire emblem | Sothe HEIGHT : 170 cm WEIGHT : 63 kg EYE COLOR : Brown HAIR COLOR : Green BODY BUILD : Muscular yet skinny his body is a moderate combination between the two. Personality Sketch POSITIVE TRAITS ❚ An expert sailor ❚ he is vary nimble and light on his feet ❚ a fast thinker ❚ accurate with throwing knives ❚ always willing to work for the right price NEGATIVE TRAITS ❚ he is arrogant to the point of blindness ❚ he sometimes fails to see the larger picture of things ❚ he is impatient ❚ once he has made up his mind he is stubborn to the point of no return ❚ often alienates himself so he has vary few allies who he can trust LIKES (+) Money (+) Woman (+) Pillaging (+) general destruction (+) chaos (war is good for busness) DISLIKES (-) Peace (-) Poverty (in regards to himself) (-) loosing (-) Stupidity (among his crew or otherwise) (-) Not having a ship OTHER FACTS ❚ He uses hair die to die his hair green. He was taken by pirates at a young age and practically raised among thieves, any life he had before that has long been crushed out of his mind. his ship was sunk in a storm he was the only survivor. DELETE THIS PART IF YOU ARE A NON-BENDER. TAKE NOTE THAT ALL AIR NOMADS ARE BENDERS.

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Special Abilities (Benders)

BENDING ELEMENT : Fire

SCOPE OF BENDING : without a master he has had to make do with what he can he has taught himself the baisics of fire bending. the art of breathing and the art of containing his fire. to this point he can use the baisics in a fight with ease but relies more on his knives a tool he was given when he first was taken aboard a pirate ship.

he can breath fire, shoot flames from his fist and kick flames, all basic moves of fire bending. his breathing is excellent and he has built up enough stamina to breath out a large amount of flames from his mouth projecting it up to 5 meters in a single breath. hence why he is called the flame throwing pirate. .

WEAPONS : he carries a set of throwing knives with him. as well as a much longer kodachi which is his primary weapon.

PERSONAL ITEMS : a shoulder bag filled with supplies and money in case something needs to be baught.

Roleplayer Profile

NAME / NICKNAME : Masorin
OTHER CHARACTERS: : N/A
HOW DID YOU FIND US? : Len
PASSWORD : Turtle-duck

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[atrb=style, background:#110000; color:#572d21; font-family: Arial; border-right: 3px solid #572d21; border-left: 3px solid #572d21;] I see Just a few Problems with the bio. But fear not, these can be fixed. The following quoted parts are what I see wrong. Dec 3, 2010 23:49:40 GMT -5 SAZA said: [style=color:#543a33; font-family: Georgia; font-weight:bold; margin-left: 20px; border-bottom: 1px dotted #3b1e16;]NEGATIVE TRAITS ❚ often lies to get what he needs ❚ always puts his own needs first ❚ will not hesitate to take a life ❚ is used to a life of stealing ❚ does not make friends easily

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It seems to be a common error, but these traits are meant to be weaknesses of your character, rather than just negative things about them. This may be a little hard to come up with, but given a little time, I'm sure you could come up with a good number of them.

Dec 3, 2010 23:49:40 GMT -5 SAZA said:

SCOPE OF BENDING : without a master he has had to make do with what he can he has taught himself the baisics of fire bending. the art of breathing and the art of containing his fire. to this point he can use the baisics in a fight with ease but relies more on his knives a tool he was given when he first was taken aboard a pirate ship.

Please, do explain more. Just giving the basics is a little bit hard to understand. What type of basic skills does he have with firebending? What type of techniques can he do? Things like that would be more helpful when you meet an enemy on the battle field. Knowing your strengths in battle will help every time.

Aside from these two things, I don't see anything wrong with training you, but until these are fixed, I'm afraid I cannot give you my seal of approvel.

-- Cloud

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[atrb=style, background:#110000; color:#572d21; font-family: Arial; border-right: 3px solid #572d21; border-left: 3px solid #572d21;] This is Much better I see this as a much better bio now that you've changed the few things I asked. I would be honored to train you in the art of swordsmanship Roleplaying. -- Cloud

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